Reasoning:

  1. Define inelasticity y ≡ MBH/√ŝ. The energy not trapped behind the apparent horizon is radiated gravitationally in the collision; classical results (from Penrose / D’eath-Payne in 4D, extended to higher D and nonzero impact parameter by Eardley-Giddings and refined by Yoshino et al.) give y ≲ 0.6 at b=0 for both the 10D (ADD) and 5D (RS) cases, falling with b - to y ≈ 0 (ADD) and y ≈ 0.2 (RS) at the largest horizon-forming impact parameter.
  2. To make a black hole of mass MBH one therefore needs parton energies larger by 1/y; because parton luminosities fall steeply, the impact-parameter-averaged cross section (eq. 2.21, weighting by 2z dz with z = b/bmax and threshold (xmin MD)²/(y(z)² s)) drops by orders of magnitude versus the geometric estimate (Figure 4), more strongly for ADD than RS.
  3. These classical y values are lower bounds computed near the Planck scale where quantum-gravity corrections are unknown - one more way the naive production picture is unreliable near threshold.
  4. Together with the thermality thresholds, this pushes genuinely semiclassical production even further out of the LHC’s effective reach.

Validity verdict (step 6)

Reconstruction: premises = classical trapped-surface inelasticity values (y <~ 0.6 at b=0, falling with b) and steeply falling parton luminosities; conclusion = impact-parameter-weighted cross section falls orders of magnitude below the geometric estimate. Traced the load-bearing step: making mass MBH requires parton CM energy MBH/y, and a steeply falling luminosity evaluated at higher invariant mass suppresses the rate by orders of magnitude; averaging over b with y(b) decreasing only strengthens this. Valid conditional on the y values; their classical near-Planck provenance is flagged in the body and priced downstream.